Blog 3

The comments were very helpful. Since no one has the same opinions I will use a combination of all of the comments. Besides the format, which I know I lacked a little on, I am going to "beef up" my introduction a little. Then coming up with a good, catchy title. Add some page numbers. Then add corresponding reference numbers to my cited sources. I'm pretty sure that I have no spelling errors, but that's an easy fix. The most important improvements are my introduction and cited sources.

I really appreciate the reviews of my paper and wish everyone luck on their revisions.